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Post by frickangel on Dec 27, 2003 7:59:05 GMT -5
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Post by frickangel on Dec 27, 2003 8:00:04 GMT -5
Please do review and tell me where did I go wrong...
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Post by frickangel on Dec 27, 2003 8:03:19 GMT -5
and these are unfinished,,will be finished as soon as I have the time to type them out...
here's the dramatic one...BrokenDown Angeland the cutesy one that will turn dramatic soon...Empty Decorations
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Post by frickangel on Dec 27, 2003 8:04:52 GMT -5
Flames, fireballs...just type them here or drop in a review on the site itself...
thanks you
*takes a humble bow and steps away...*
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Post by slidershal on Dec 27, 2003 19:40:00 GMT -5
Hey Frickangel I REALLY like "BrokenDown Angel" so far. I thought that the action was good, and more importantly, your portrayal of the characters was RIGHT ON!!! That's not always easy to do. And the chemistry between the characters was perfect as well [except that the "romantic undertones" between Shal and Jess SHOULD be between Shal and Bren  ]. Seriously though, I hope you get more of this story written soon! I like it! You're not a Bren/Shal fan I know, but if you would like to read some of my fic anyway, just let me know  |
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Post by frickangel on Dec 27, 2003 21:44:10 GMT -5
Hey Frickangel I REALLY like "BrokenDown Angel" so far. I thought that the action was good, and more importantly, your portrayal of the characters was RIGHT ON!!! That's not always easy to do. And the chemistry between the characters was perfect as well [except that the "romantic undertones" between Shal and Jess SHOULD be between Shal and Bren ].
On the Shal and Jess thing, well there wasn't suppose to be any romance between them...to make things a little clearer I'm not Jess and Shal romance shipper. I love their brother and sister thing. Not the romantic bit...Shal and BRennan can get together and have a baseball team of kids for all I care. Just don't make the bond between Shal and Jess suffer.
So slider, you can breathe easier on the ship's. You probably love Empty Decorations than. |
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Post by frickangel on Dec 27, 2003 21:46:29 GMT -5
okay so if you guys wanna read anything else (like you want to but I7ll post this anyway...) just click HERE
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Post by slidershal on Dec 28, 2003 18:08:25 GMT -5
I'm not Jess and Shal romance shipper. I love their brother and sister thing. Not the romantic bit...Shal and BRennan can get together and have a baseball team of kids for all I care. Just don't make the bond between Shal and Jess suffer.
LOL about the baseball team of kids ;D And I agree with you on the Shal/Jesse thing. That relationship is too CUTE! |
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Post by Rain on Dec 28, 2003 18:14:23 GMT -5
i read broken down angel befre ...u need to finish it damn it i like it |
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Post by Rain on Dec 29, 2003 1:28:39 GMT -5
i think the jesse and shal thing is very cute and ur very welcome angel. ;D
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Post by frickangel on Jan 3, 2004 2:22:05 GMT -5
The day I don't put a S&J bond is the day that frickangel hasn't been taking her medication. At least no one can plagarise me...lol
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Post by Rain on Jan 3, 2004 15:14:57 GMT -5
lmao funny Angel... ;D
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